Friday, January 12, 2007

peace haiku 30-36

respite from the clock
released from the pressure of
time for a second

mind races finding
new categories spaces
then snacks interfere

evergreen ever
moist ever fresh every day
a garden to tend

how do we know it's
not lightning hitting ocean
creating cells life

sometimes dancing by
himself was the best way to
know he was alive

it's hard to work hard
on a tropical island
don't blame the natives

good stuff on sale &
cute boys from different schools on
good days at the mall

3 comments:

phil said...

awesome.

bjurk said...

blogging on friday
should always be in haiku
or tanka if bold

skippy haha said...

haiku or tanka
every friday a lot of
syllable counting